Queen of Fools

molossus

Hello,
Here is the first wip of a new character I am working. Still early steps.The end goal is to have a game model in marmoset this time.
About two years I made a king of fools and now I wanted to create his female counterpart.



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molossus

an update

calen

Cool character, very visually appealing. Love the derpy fish.

molossus

Thx Calen!

Brian "Panda" Choi

I'd double check where you should have sewing seams on the clothing. The leg protrustions, for example, would seem less lumpy and make more sense if there are seqing seams at the base of the attachments.

Feels good to see Alice in Wonderland/Jester aesthetics again.

BagelHero

This went from "meh" to pretty damn awesome real fast. Good job! Have you started the Retopo?

molossus

Thx for the feedback guys!
@JadeEyePanda I think I made the seam to dark so it's not visible enough I'll post a clay render tonight. There is actually also a huge zipper on the back.
@Thx No man, no retopo yet, there is still a lot to tweak on this...
I want to get the model right first.
I usually just decimate and use a lot of textures for different parts but as I want it more of a game character.
I want to go with one 4 k for the costume and one 4k for the skin. And keep the polycount under the 50 k which will be quiet a challenge for me . Never really done an actual game character. We will see how it turn out.

earthprimeval

Love the color contrast...nice choices. There's a bend in the leg/ankle that throws me off...maybe it's just the angle.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Actually, yeah those shins look snapped.

molossus

yeah I like to exaggerate the bend in limbs to have a more extreme pose. But it's a bit off and too thin at the moment will fix it!

AtticusMars

Love it but I think the leggings need to go all the way down into the boots. Right now it just looks like the feet start too high

molossus

there is something wrong with her feet. The shoe are way to low...

molossus

here is an update, not all the critiques are incorporated though but a render always give another view on the subject. the staff is really a placeholder.
https://vimeo.com/114415453