"Are you not entertained!?" orc

IosuPalacios

Hi guys,

I´m been doing this the last days. I´m pretty satisfied with how it is going but as much fun I´m having with the rendering I would like to hear a second opinion about anathomy and values. Kind of lost in the details and since It´s my project for this week may be somebody could come up with something I´m skiping.

Thanks a lot!

DarkStar

i am not entertained at all. Sorry :poly114b:

But Great work!!! :thumbup:

IosuPalacios

Thanks man

IosuPalacios

A bit more detail

IosuPalacios

I think I will go on with other stuff, I'm getting prety tired of this one XD. Still critics are wellcome

dfacto

Hey, dig the work man, he looks very mean and the rendering is great. Some crits:

-His left arm could use some more clarification. I think that the wooden stake is shoved into his forearm and his hand has been amputated? But is it maybe just tied tot he back of his forearm? Best to put the stake at a different location on his arm to clear up the ambiguity.
-The dead orc behind him looks like a rock on first glance. A floating arm, a pool of blood or the head bobbing up would serve to explain the situation more clearly.
-I get the limited color palette, but his weapon would stand apart from him a bit better if ti was a different hue.

IosuPalacios

Hi dfacto, thanks for your critics.

About the first point originally it was not aligned with the arm and it was more comprehensible that it was coming out of the forearm.

Both second and third point can be explained pretty easy by me looking forward to move on in to the next illustration ^^U. But that's not excuse XD and If I find time in the future to come again with this one I will change the things you point it out, they are completely legit

Thanks for finding time to answer!