[Riot Art Contest] - Ghost Bride Morgana

kmactastic

EDIT: finished model:

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I really really like Paul Kwon's art, which is a big part of why I picked this one. ANY feedback is appreciated:)

Kel-Shaded

Great start, and i've never seen that skin, its lush

Abrvpt

Good choice of skin and nice start !
But the proportions might be a little wrong. The head seems quite small, and the breasts to high on the ribcage. Because of that, the armpits are also to high, and the arms lack of muscle definition. Even if the are thinner on the game model than on the concept they do need a bit more volume on your sculpt to show an accurate muscle structure.
Keep up !

kmactastic

Thank you! Abrvpt, I will work on it. I super appreciate it (:

kmactastic

Okay, fixed the tube arms, added some weight to her chest, and made her head bigger. Also had some fun with the hair...

Abrvpt

Looks much better, keep going !

erroldynamic

Looking good, loving the hair!

kmactastic

Update on my sculpt. Blocked in the Reapers and fleshed out the jewelry. Critiques are super appreciated ^^

ish

the ears look tinier in the reference image,
looking good so far,

kmactastic

Ish, yah thinner and longer I think. THanks for pointing that out.
Heres some progress on the Hi-Res. Will probably change scythes to be more like the original concept.

kmactastic

Another WIP. I realized I forgot her veil!

kmactastic

Here's a WIP of the topology at 12.5k tris right now. My guess is it will be less than 15k when finished. I need to rework the face and hands. I kind of just went for it and now have to go back and fix some mistakes...

kmactastic

Another update. This time with better topo and UVs. Might change the Uvs around once i get some feedback from friends or nice polycounters. Also redid the face based off of my friend Chris's feedback (:

Jenesis1214

Looking great so far K! Cannnot wait to see the textures!

kmactastic

Thanks Jenesis (:
Here is the start of my textures.

kmactastic

Another WIP on textures. Probably going to darken the Grims since they look a little washed out right now. Also need to work on getting the metal jewelry to look more like metal >.>

kmactastic

Trying to figure out a good pose. I am leaning towards something like the middle one...

Pretty sure I am done with the texture. At this point I feel like I am just noodling.

Darknavigator

Pure Gold! That came out great!

kmactastic

wow thank you >.<

oscar3dart

Fantastic!, nice execution, and UV space distribution. Specially love the texture painted and color definition, in my humble opinion I think you nail it.

Great work! best of luck

Cheers

kmactastic

I think I am done. I feel like I leveled up a little on this one ^^. I really love Paul Kown's concepts.

Thank you Kel-shaded, Abrypt, erroldynamic, ish, Jenesis 1214, darknavigator and oscar3dart for the feedback and encouragement. I really appreciate it.

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SteVAI

Beautiful model. Love her face!

Dan!

Great job on the finished piece! Good luck!

Jenesis1214

Beautiful jon K!

Waterbear

Her face and dress are awesome. Great entry! Good luck!

kmactastic

Thank you so much guys. I am so glad I finished.:D