Bone taker set - Juggernaut

giovannyarce

Hello guys, my name is Giovanny, here a little collaboration I'm doing with a friend of mine (Miguel Collazo), he is doing the concept art, I'm doing the 3d modeling. Any suggestion of critiques for the design are more than welcome, more updates later. The name for the set is still a placeholder, any name suggestion could help too.

hayes87

Valve has tendency to not accept submissions with skulls or gore since they cant be used on the chinese client. Im not sure if it affects you since its a animal skull but you might need to do a 'low violence' version without skulls.

Shock

its only about human skulls. animal skulls are no problem

Insaneophobia

Nah Shock I'm quite certain it's all skulls. As far as I can remember WoW had to change all the bone dragons to normal dragons for the chinese version of Wrath of the Lich King

Shock

normal vs low violence. it still looks verymuch like a bone to me.
but if phil is right, just design him a second style for the head. maybe with some kind of facemask

here is the example content:

BladeofEvilsBane

They accept animal skulls on a case by case basis. Giovanny your concept artist should start taking away all the details, it's too much for the game and will read only as noise. In lieu of this your sculpt is starting to look nice, especially the helm. I'd cut back on the superfluous details like the bracer has and start to make big details instead.

giovannyarce

Thanks a lot for this guys, I will have a talk with the concept artist and see how to fix this.

nephilim93

I'd add some kinda subtle rune or pattern on the flat part of the weapon to break up all that space. Keep it simple though, just a geometric shape or two would probably work ok.

As others have said, skulls can be a problem, and small details (like the bracer studs) will be lost ingame.

The concept is really cool though.

giovannyarce

Mask change wip