Stylized Robosuit - Crits Wanted

Dmellott

Hello folks, I am currently working on a robosuit / space marine sorta piece.

My inspirations for this piece were retro space and astronaut suits (I'm a big fan of the spherical and rounded designs found in that style.)

I would really like some feedback on the overall proportions and feel. Also, I could use some feedback or advice on what I could possibly add to this piece to make it more impactful. I feel as if its missing some bits and bobbles or something to really tie the piece together.

Any input is greatly appreciated!

Nosslak

The biggest problem I can see is that the joint areas don't make much sense if there is supposed to be a person inside of it. The problem here is that it looks like you took a base model with some already weird proportions (the shins and forearms are way too short) and then moved the limbs further outwards from the body and built some armor around that.

I would also exaggerate the panel lines more as it's supposed to be stylized, but that's far from the biggest problem right now.

Dmellott

Nosslak,

Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it! I've spent some time today reworking various parts of the model. Hopefully this is starting to read a bit better.

Dmellott

Side view and silhouettes.