I don't know how serious you are about this competition, but I'll critique it like you're a Riot artist xD.
Composition: It's fairly static. The columns are vertical and frame the picture. The focal point is Zac and he's in the middle of the piece.
Lighting: Pretty ambiguous, the lighting on the columns suggest that it's lit mostly from behind while Zac and his blob things don't share that shading. Also, I don't think Zac is that transparent, there's a lot of blur and subsurface scattering going on in his original splash.
Anatomy: Zigg's legs aren't that long. What are those pink/red things at the end of Zac and his minion's head?
I agree that the scene is a bit static... im currently working on a couple ideas to help push it a bit... breaking/crumbling pillars... etc.
The lighting I have been struggling with a bit... I intend to keep pushing it. Perhaps lighten up the pillars so there's less shadow.
I took a little liberty with Zac's transparency in order to push the idea that Ziggs shoved a bomb down his throat... might tone it back a bit...
If you look at Zacs original splash... the red/pink glowy bit is there at the end of his dangly bit... might have to make it more illuminated so its not so jarring.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment... was starting to think only the female characters were getting commented on
Couple of updates as I havent had a chance last couple days to post. Adding details as I go, and making another change to the minion... A large chunk of work done on Ziggs... still more to go.
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I don't know how serious you are about this competition, but I'll critique it like you're a Riot artist xD.
I agree that the scene is a bit static... im currently working on a couple ideas to help push it a bit... breaking/crumbling pillars... etc.
The lighting I have been struggling with a bit... I intend to keep pushing it. Perhaps lighten up the pillars so there's less shadow.
I took a little liberty with Zac's transparency in order to push the idea that Ziggs shoved a bomb down his throat... might tone it back a bit...
If you look at Zacs original splash... the red/pink glowy bit is there at the end of his dangly bit... might have to make it more illuminated so its not so jarring.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment... was starting to think only the female characters were getting commented on
Breaking up the pillars to add a bit more action to the scene...
more to come
FIne tuning a lot of stuff...