Second image: I gave her a face to motivate myself into continuing, I don't think the end result will look like this, I might try to make it look more like a Riven
This is coming along very nicely! Only suggestion is that her "laying on her arm" is a little awkward. It looks more like she lost the arm since it literally disappears beneath her. Maybe try propping her up on her other arm? Or showing it poking out beneath her.
Lokii288 Yeah that arm is a struggle for me, right now it's just supposed to look like she's holding the arm around her stomach. Since she's lying facing the ground the arm just naturally pushes back and almost disappears underneath her
But I DO understand what you mean cause it's mocking me and I gotta find a way to make it look more convincing. mechbunnies Thankks
Let's see what did I do. I tried a new position on the arm, removed her fist~glove? completely, put in some new colours to create a stronger mood, made sion a light source (not really) defined her sword and tilted the whole scene to make Riven not lie entirely on the bottom of the canvas. - Starting to touch the background
Still drawing. Kept going with this red theme, slightly more saturated and brought out Riven more from the background and started to render some details on her. The background though, still at a rough stage.
I really like the rendering and the soft light you have going on. I think I would try to show the sword stuck in something (the ground, a rock, etc) and to make sure Sion's shoulder armor doesn't get sucked into (or seem attached to) the sword's handle. Maybe have Riven's legs overlap each other so it seems like she was trying crawl to the sword.
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Second image: I gave her a face to motivate myself into continuing, I don't think the end result will look like this, I might try to make it look more like a Riven
Third image: Where I'm at now
Starting to lay in colours, resized Riven aswell and repositioned her sword a little to reveal her hand a little more
But I DO understand what you mean cause it's mocking me and I gotta find a way to make it look more convincing.
mechbunnies Thankks