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Phaeton1911
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just finished this, my 2nd vray project
pretty happy with it overall, learned a whole lot about post production and the render elements output.
gonna go back and re process my forest holiday scene now.

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  • Meloncov
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    Meloncov greentooth
    It's looking nice! The one thing I'd change is to tweak the composition so the focal point a bit more clear. Right now the table on the right and the sign on the left are fighting for dominance.
  • pixelpatron
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    pixelpatron polycounter
    The tables and chairs seem out of proportion of the rest of the scene. (too large). I'd agree about the lighting, it's a bit blown out over the tables and chairs on the right. I'd make your main focal point the counter. This is screaming for one of those old metal cash registers all copper.
  • fab-camp
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    fab-camp polycounter lvl 6
    looks nice, but the area around the cupboard in the back looks to dark but in same time to saturated to me
    also you might add some more details and lighting to the door in the back right next to the cupboard. it might be in the back but its sitting quite in the center of the image and close the counter and its colored packages as my main focalpoint

    edit:
    same opinion as pixelpatron. chairs and stairs look slightly too big
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