Hello guys!
I choose Bittersweet Lulu for this contest, and I'll try my best to make a good composition!
I'll keep this main post to show you the progress of my work.
ANY critics and comments are welcome, so please, make it
I don't like to post this kind of WIP, I don't know...
SOOO, I haven't started to put values in this piece yet, I just chose some colors and the lighting... That's easier for me to start with, otherwise I'll get lost in the paiting, haha.
At the moment, I don't know if the background should be darker because she's bittersweet e.e
I'm not sure how to explain it. I think it might be that the mouth and jaw structure doesn't look symmetrical.
Hope you don't mind but here's a quick paintover, I'm not sure what you were planning to do with her teeth or tongue, so I just filled something in. You probably don't have to give her as much of a chin as I did if it is a style choice, but just the jawline and mouth shape was a bit off I guess.
I also squinted her right eye ever so slightly more, so it looks like the corner of her mouth is actually pushing her cheek up.
I'm not sure how to explain it. I think it might be that the mouth and jaw structure doesn't look symmetrical.
Hope you don't mind but here's a quick paintover, I'm not sure what you were planning to do with her teeth or tongue, so I just filled something in. You probably don't have to give her as much of a chin as I did if it is a style choice, but just the jawline and mouth shape was a bit off I guess.
I also squinted her right eye ever so slightly more, so it looks like the corner of her mouth is actually pushing her cheek up.
Hope it helps
So much better! Thanks!
Can I use your paintover as a reference to fix the mouth?
Thank you for pointing out my mistake.
So, today I'm working on the hair/hat, and I redesigned it because I'm having problems at finding references (rito halp)
When I find good refs I try adjust the design.
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They will be very important when I start painting, haha.
Thanks
That's awesome! I usually play with Lulu too!
Thank u for your comment
Congratz
I love love love love your job.
Madame X
yay!
I'll post a WIP soon.
Thank u for the support!
SOOO, I haven't started to put values in this piece yet, I just chose some colors and the lighting... That's easier for me to start with, otherwise I'll get lost in the paiting, haha.
At the moment, I don't know if the background should be darker because she's bittersweet e.e
WIP WIP WIP
I hope so! <3 Thanks!
THAT PAINTING <3333
SOOOO CUTE
You think so? *-*
Thanks!
HAHA THANKS!
Like you, girl.
Xo, xo.
X
Thanks!
I don't know, maybe because she don't have teeth or tongue yet?
Or is something more anatomical?
I tried to make something like a doll's mouth... Like this:
Hope you don't mind but here's a quick paintover, I'm not sure what you were planning to do with her teeth or tongue, so I just filled something in. You probably don't have to give her as much of a chin as I did if it is a style choice, but just the jawline and mouth shape was a bit off I guess.
I also squinted her right eye ever so slightly more, so it looks like the corner of her mouth is actually pushing her cheek up.
Hope it helps
So much better! Thanks!
Can I use your paintover as a reference to fix the mouth?
Thank you for pointing out my mistake.
I not rendering yet, just trying to working in the "light" you gave me, haha.
Oh, that's good! Thank u for your help I'm very glad
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So, today I'm working on the hair/hat, and I redesigned it because I'm having problems at finding references (rito halp)
When I find good refs I try adjust the design.
I used these references to the hair and hat:
And we have that:
(the other layers are hidden)
Today is the paint day! Lulu will gain some values!