disc war Sivir

Ericsmithart

doing udyr, figured i'd try my hand at a skin idea for sivir. tron themed disc war. sketch to follow later. good luck everyone.

Ericsmithart

first wip, rough sketch of the pose.

blue_skies

I assume you're with the Pax Sivir skin? It's pretty much a Tron skin. Not that you couldn't do something different, but maybe you should try doing a rework of that one - it certainly needs it.

Ericsmithart

heh, wasn't even aware of the pax skin lol. anywho, here is an update.

awied18

She looks a bit bored. I like the idea of the skin but maybe make the action of her a bit more dynamic

Ericsmithart

I agree, I do like the pose though, I wonder if i can change a lot of the feel with a change in facial expression. we'll see.

blue_skies

I think the pose could be made way more dynamic and awesome by extending the motion till her throwing arm crosses either one side of her body or the other (depending on if she's throwing it backhanded or not). That way it would break of the silhouette and give you a great eye lead towards her face.

Ericsmithart

appreciate the advice blue skies, ill see if i can do anything with the arm and see if i like it. went ahead and change her expression and some other things. feel like the facial expression change, definitely helped with the intensity of the image.

Ericsmithart

another update.

Odow

I think there's too much stuff going on, light everywhere it's hard to focus. Plus, I don't really like this face.. She looks like she's on the loo.

Ericsmithart

thanks for the input odow, will look in to it.