My first portoflio piece (Hand painted)

MrCreator

Hello everyone, I finished my first portoflio piece. Its based on David Revoys concept art. Its missing part in between his fingers, but I decided to go without it. What do you think?



Concept art:

turpedo

You could definitely push the texture more before you call it down. It looks like you're missing a lot of the cool details that cover the skin. Also pay attention to how shiny and wet the skin looks whereas yours looks kind of flat. The creatures eye gets lost against the skin as well, could definitely make the eye value darker.

All in all, I would consider the materials of the anatomy, the muscle definitions/folds, as well as the markings and subtle surface details. Something that helps me with the forms is picking a lightsource and thinking about how the body and muscles react to it.

Hope this helps!

MrCreator

Thanks for your feedback turpedo, I will definitely go back to it and make it better!

Wilbert Pierce

Definitely keep pushing it. You have a good start. I think first thing would be the proportions first. But you have some good areas to build from.

DWalker

The mouth and forward part of the skull could use some better definition; the entire area is a bit muddy at the moment.

MrCreator

Hello again, I did some fixes on him, what do you think?

Spiffy

I'd focus on the sculpt rather than the painting atm, that's whats really going to make or break your model.
you should be focusing on mid-large level details, Large scales, Bones, large and deep creases etc. then work your way down.

This link should help you a bunch, They go over forms and designs and further down explain sculpting scales, high detailed skin and using alpha's.:
http://www.creativebloq.com/3d-tips/monster-size-sculpting-tips-123707