[Riot Art Contest] - Battle Bunny Riven

PyrZern · Oct 2014

And here's the Champion I am going to work on

Let's all have fun and make awesome arts !

http://www.lolking.net/models/?champion=92&skin=3

Fulgor · Oct 2014

awesome

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Started working on her face. I went back to Hazardous's workshops and studied how he made those sexy ladies :P

Messed up the eyelids so it seems...

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Prototyping hair. Hopefully I fixed her eyelids now. Made her necktie. Sculpting her torso atm.

Shanteez · Oct 2014

looks like a man

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Hey man. Could you elaborate a bit more ? I'm trying a different style from what I usually do here.

Here's the face ref I use.

Odow · Oct 2014

Doesn't look like a man to me..

I would probably add more volume to her hair. :>

makecg · Oct 2014

not a man, if anything i would soften the eyebrow line too sharp, i think the chin might be throwing it off, more volume in the lower cheek area.

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Thanks guys

I will work further on her face.

Gotta get better at making hair planes then

PyrZern · Oct 2014

I worked a bit more on her face. Will work more on her hair tomorrow.
I went ahead and started on her body. Aiming for a bit more busty and muscle-toned.

The bunny glove looks funny, though <_<"

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Update

Have to further refine the suit jacket on her back. Very tricky. Also, yes, that's Vi's hand.

explodingseashells · Oct 2014

lookin badass! perhaps where the lips meet the corners of her mouth, the line could be softened slightly?

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Lip corners are so tricky man

Feels I can't get them to look right yet.

explodingseashells · Oct 2014

haha yeah man i know exactly how you feel. trying to get them right on my current character...nightmare. worst part is, it makes me read my character totally different with just slightly fucked lip corners.

strollinthewoods · Oct 2014

Great work. - looking forward to follow this thread.
There will be little doubt that this is a female we are dealing with - and I like the curves you have put on here. That being said - Shanteez has a point - and it is no problem for me at all to see your face as a male character. And I would take his short comment to hart - and just be aware of it, does not mean it is something you need to address.

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Thanks man. I will see what I can do with her face.

Here's update in the mean time

Khronos · Oct 2014

lotet · Oct 2014

Hey man, good luck

I think the legs look a bit stumpy.

take a look at this piece by "old master Haz"
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/309/c/e/fran_ffxii__progress_2_by_hazardousarts-d5k1bg2.jpg
just posted the link, didnt want to spam the thread with pictures =P

see how the legs for a sort of S shape and how the knees are pointing inwards rather then in a straight line. also notice the curve again on the lower part of the leg.

PyrZern · Oct 2014

Thanks man! Yeah, the legs are too 'meh'. Have to sexify them up, Haz-style :P

slosh · Oct 2014

I think I may have commented about the hair on facebook but the ponytail looks strange to me. I can see why you did that looking at the original character but maybe the chunks just need to be larger and vary in size as well. I think what might fix the stumpy legs is to lower her waist a tad and make her legs longer if you're keeping her hips at the current width.

PyrZern · Oct 2014

I will play more with her hairs man. Thanks a lot

I just slimmed her down a bit. But what do you mean by lower her waist a bit and make her legs longer ? Wouldn't that make her legs shorter instead ?? You know, instead of moving her crotch up.

Also made changes to her garter some adjustments. Dang underwears are so hard to make...