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Character WIP - Temperance Dawn

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  • Brian "Panda" Choi
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    Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range
    You should run a ZBrush Polish operation on your shoulder pads to soften the edges. Right now, in the HP, they look too sharp. Might make the normal map hard to read.
  • PyrZern
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    PyrZern polycounter lvl 12
    Thanks a lot man! I did what you suggested and it looks better ^^

    Had to tweak things around a bit and fixed her knee cap(somewhat).
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  • Xaragoth
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    Xaragoth polycounter lvl 8
    Getting along nicely man :D Her face might need a tiny bit of work, looks a bit alien right now (I speak from experience, mine do as well often :P)

    Though I'm not sold on the color composition on the paints you did. I think it lacks a bit in spreading the colors more. Also I think you're using too many colors overall that do not go well together right now. The blues go together and the red/orange/yellow go well together. But they oppose each other very hard (one set being cold, one being hot) and lead to a lot of a noisy feeling and making a lot of the pieces not fit together into a single set of clothing.

    You shoul think a bit more about color theory for the final paint job you want to do on her.
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