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melviso

Currently working on this. Any feedback would be appreciated.I am a bit worried about the scale. Is there anything that seems off?

Thanks.

cadgonegames

I think your table is bit low, draws look a bit weird also. I typically throw a biped in with about 176cm scale and just judge scale based on him

melviso

Thanks, didn't notice it before. I am using furniture measurement references. Don't know why it turned out that way. Must have entered the wrong dimensions. Does anyone know where u can find funiture data in cm? Everything I have seen is in inches or feet.

Any other things that seem out of place. Also I changed the camera view. Looks better now.

Eric Chadwick

Moved this to 3D P&P.

I like this so far! Camera angle seems odd to me though. Where am "I" the viewer? Laying on the bed? Crouching in the corner?

Also the camera tilt is a bit annoying, like "hey I can make this EDGY if I tilt the cam".

You could use an interior light to add visual interest on the right, and to make it look less "abandoned".

Is that some triangulation on the bottom of the curtain? Usually curtains don't brush the floor, they're cut to hang about 1cm above the ground.

I bet this is just a fast preview render, but the grain is distracting.

Keep going, it's looking great!

Meteorkid

There would be mounting brackets under the bookshelve thing you have above the desk. Imagine how much weight that it would have to support if it was fully stocked.

FantaBanta3D

Looks really nice! I can't wait to see the textures you put on this!

Along the same lines as Meteorkid's comment, I think there would be a backboard on the bedside table? Just to stop things falling out the back. Also i'm not 100% sure about the coving you put around the ceiling? It almost looks like the room is a cupboard itself to me. Perhaps a curved coving there might look better?



Not that your coving looks bad, it might even just be me!

Can't wait to see the finished piece here though

melviso

Thanks for the feedback, guys.

melviso

Worked on the textures.Still feel the chair, bedsheets and laptop needs work.Feel free to point out if materials look wrong.

Thanks.

tierzilla

Hey Melviso , looking really good , i suggest you to give more life to the room , more books , toys , more photos , maybe posters.


this can add a plus.
and pushing a bit the spec on some assets.
hope it helps you!