Game enviroment

Yusufu_Cote

Heya all! first post woo! But anways working on a scene right now based off this concept art from Jack Eaves:


I broke this down in two phases. First up was the enviroment:

A few good modular chunks here as well as some fun more unique store fronts. Next up is props!

To be honest i didnt see there was such a little range of tables and chairs here! super exited to work with those!
Did spend a little time doing a basic block out:

Need to tweek some spacing here and there but happy with this first pass. Now to tweek thinks around, once maya will actully update! haha Feel free to leave feed and and suggestions! thanks guys!

Yusufu_Cote

Just a quick update to my scene I’m currently working on. I’ve been building out alot of the really basic geo that’s going into the scene, have a few height issues with the bottom layer, but easy fix! Update ya again soon!

Yusufu_Cote

Here's an u[date to my project. Still very WIP and im really bad about updating here. There was a lot more assests then i thought! haha.

Yusufu_Cote

Update again. Pluggin away at this getting closer, but still alot of work to do before next week!

Dmellott

Looking good so far. Gonna keep my eye on this one

ScottHoneycutt

Yeah keep going, do what you can, I'll watch too

Yusufu_Cote

Thanks so much guys!

Yusufu_Cote

Small update. Tweak of some textures. added some bushes. Working with paralex maps pot try adn get some depth in those windows

ScottHoneycutt

Looks better in the back. Not sure if you were already planning on it, I will recommend breaking up the monotony of the curtains in the windows a little more. Its just the way they are all half straight - half curved off to the side.

Yusufu_Cote

Ya its planned its a little down my todo list but a definite want to get done.

Yusufu_Cote

Sorry for lack of updates, been pretty sick past lil bit. But here we go! textures updated, added more props, tweaked the lighting. Have a deadline on this tomorrow so ill post the final one of that but ill likely keep working on this the rest of the month

Yusufu_Cote

Heres the final shot!

pixelpatron

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Your not done.....

Lighting is too dark in a lot of places.

Cobblestone road looks great in the ref, your scene looks like flat concrete?

Your lighting doesn't have that green in it, sure you can do your own thing, but I prefer the concept to your current lighting.

The tunnel/arch in your scene looks incomplete, ike that building is flat (think hollywood backdrop) In real life and in the reference you can see that those rooms above the arch have depth. It's a tunnel not just an arch.

The brown windows on the left in the foreground look great and have amazing details in the ref, your lighting is destroying those details. (if they are there.)

A lot of your textures are too warm, and need to be desaturated somewhat if you want to match the reference. The brick in the background is an obvious one, yours is a shade of red, while the concept has more of a brownish/tan tone.

The ornate lanterns really fit the architecture, nice craftsmanship, and details. Yours are cubes......lazy.

Your floor is a flat poly, it's a lot more work, but it'll completely make this more believable if you were to make your road/path have some height variation to it.

Fix all those up and keep plugging away at this, you've come to far to stop now.

ScottHoneycutt

The lighting could use more work. There are missed opportunities here. The lights on the left aren't really doing much and aren't reading well as lights because they are passing through the glass as if it wasn't there. It needs a better glass material for it. The dark building on the right side is shadowed out completely which is hurting the composition. No one would sit here if it were so dark like this on a sunny day. I hope that helps.

Yusufu_Cote

ill be working on this more this month. Just had a big dead line today for a class. Defiantly needs more poslish before it hits the portfolio. Thanks for all the feed back guys!