Queen Ant

Swp

Hey guys , my first post here... I don't have ton of experience in sculpting but still criticism is welcome
So here's my latest personal project
Queen Ant done in zbrush / after effects
9mil verts

Swp

http://i.imgur.com/HfVN2xm.jpg

skodone

i think one problem of the sculpt is, that everything is in a quite similar color value so one cannot really differ between the parts and also the forms and silhouette are/is not very strong which makes the character quite difficult to read.

i would try to get more contrast and better readable forms to the head try making some of the assets more prominent as the cables, zippers, tubes and maybe change the direction of the antennae to make them more visible in the silhouette. try applying a flat color material in black on a bright background and rotate your character, lookt close at the silhouette, and make it stronger so one can read pose and features of the character by the silhouette only.

this would improve the sculpt a lot.