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Phaeton1911
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thanks to peoples feedback i think i made another leap forward with this, its pretty close to being done now.

need better trees, a big ass moon, and some variation in the walls next.

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  • Tamaru
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    Tamaru polycounter lvl 5
    Looks a lot better! I'm amazed. Good job.
  • Tobbo
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    Tobbo polycounter lvl 11
    It would help if you used something else to host your images. Something like www.Imgur.com would work better.

    I don't know how the scene was before improvements were made? Why not just post these in your original thread? I personally love seeing work before and after improvements. It makes it difficult to do if every time you make an overhaul on the work you create a new thread for it.

    I don't know if I'm really feeling the cloud/fog effect. It's really drowning out the images and just making the entire scene look desaturated.

    Also with regards to the tree with no leaves, some of the branches look funny. I think you may have tapered them off too quickly. Because they go from being pretty fat/thick to a point rather quickly.
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