Anatomy Study, Crit wanted!

KyleReeceHall

Hi guys, would be great if you could give me some crit on my latest anatomy study, Im making this to use as a base for other characters.

Thanks
Kyle

AsaNYC

Face is pretty good. You seem to be understand some basics of the muscle groups and proportion, but you need to work from reference to move forward. Angular offsets, skeletal insertions, etc.

There's probably some orthos linked in the pokycount wiki to cut your teeth on. There's also https://www.anatomy4sculptors.com/ which has some full figure orthos.

rory

I'll bite. These are the things that stood out the most to me.

-Shoulders too narrow.
-legs too straight. Bring in that knee area. And watch overall curve.
-ear too low. Align bottom to bottom of nose. Top to somewhere between eye/eyebrow
-Chest is off
-Hip/ass area rework.
- I would also soften the neck. Those muscles usually aren't that prominent unless the heads turned

-On the face the lower lip seems harsh.

Messy Paint over.

KyleReeceHall

Thanks Guys, great feedback, ill get onto those changes and update this post soon.

KyleReeceHall

Minor updates while i got the time!

KyleReeceHall

Wow, its been a long time! thought I would upload my latest anatomy study in hope of rpelies from experienced artists, any help would be greatly appreciated, heres my latest anatomy study, thanks!

dimosM

Hey, since you have a 6-pack you are gonna have to place the top 2 packs above the thoracic arch, directly underneath the pectoralis major.
And the inner head of the gastrocnemius is actually lower than the outer one.

KyleReeceHall

Thanks, I really should have known that about the abs, im not sure what I was thinking! I even sculpted very faint abs above the thoratic arch which would give him 10 abs, a very silly mistake! thanks for pointing that out!

KyleReeceHall

Heres my latest update

dimosM

hey, abs are still troubling me, i can see some faint lines in the level of the navel so are you going for a 4-pack or a 6-pack after all ?