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Zukan
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Zukan polycounter lvl 5
Hello poly counters. Once again I look to you for feed back. I'm now done with college and trying to make myself look employable. Frankly I'm not too confident right now. One thing I think I need is more characters. So I intend to start a contemporary female character of some sort this week.

Please let me know what you all think I could fix up, remove, or change.

connor-odonoghue.com
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  • Brian "Panda" Choi
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    Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range
    Spell and grammar check your about section. First error "recently" is misspelled.

    "Dealt with customers and managed the donation room." should be reworded under Goodwill. It sounds like customers were a burden, use a different verb.
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  • Zukan
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    Zukan polycounter lvl 5
    JadeEyePanda wrote: »
    Spell and grammar check your about section. First error "recently" is misspelled.

    "Dealt with customers and managed the donation room." should be reworded under Goodwill. It sounds like customers were a burden, use a different verb.

    Thank you. That should be corrected now.
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  • BagelHero
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    BagelHero interpolator
    More stuff! Layout seems solid, content is solid. If you can, simplify the page names-- I will never remember http://www.connor-odonoghue.com/#!lannister/cfre.
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  • Ra6ga5ka
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    Ra6ga5ka polycounter lvl 9
    More Stuff.. to me the site looks cool. 2 things.. dont show ur UVs they are horroble(waste a lot of texture space) or rework the UV.
    on hint. normalmaps should have the background color(128,128,255) its becouse of the mip-mapping ;-)
    and in my opinion show ur handpainted textured models with an unlit or simple lambert shading and not with the marmorset SSS shading if u dont have good textures to control the shader..
    the actual presentation lower the quality of ur stuff.
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  • LRoy
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    LRoy polycounter lvl 14
    I think the you have the right idea and the layout of your site is fine.

    Just focus on producing more models trying to improve with each one.
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  • Zukan
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    Zukan polycounter lvl 5
    Thank you all for the feedback. Sounds like I just need to keep trucking with my characters. I really hate being such a noob. :P

    *I took down all the texture maps.
    *I added 301 Redirects to the pages (so you can type connor-odonoghue.com/goblin and it will take you straight to the goblin page or connor-odonoghue.com/lannister to go to Jaime etc.) I don't think I can change the URL however (I built the site using Wix).
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