Hi guys I was hoping i could get some feedback on my work that i am going to be posting. I really want to improve on my character work. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Other views will greatly help viewers to give better feedback. From what I can see from just the front view is that her nostril crease (alar nasal sulcus) needs more depth to it. You can use the Dam Standard brush to get a nice dig in that area, though masking the cheek around it and building up the nostril may be better.
Overall she has a very soft face making her look very young, if that's intended then you're on the right path. If you have a specific reference posting images of that will definitely help feedback too.
So far so good, keep it up and I'll keep checking your work out =D
There was really no reference for the face it was just a whole bunch of different picture i looked at
I forgot the other views here the are i havent done anything on it yet just been busy at work.
I agree with iadagraca, your features are pretty solid, but I feel like the form isn't there. At this point the move brush may keep your details, but in the future try to stay away from details until you've nailed the form.
I usually look at a lot of different reference myself, but I stick to a specific style for a character. In your case you look like you have a mixed bunch in there.
I did some paintovers myself, I don't mean to step on iadagraca's toes just thought the more the merrier.
Here's a Gif with some adjustments and painting:
Here's a still:
and here's an attempt at your 3/4ths view:
There was really no reference for the face it was just a whole bunch of different picture i looked at.
That's your first biggest mistake. You can't make study without reference. Go choose an actor or a specific person, get as much reference as you can, and work toward making your sculpt look as close as possible as the original reference.
You could start too by making some anatomy study. That would be the best to be honest. Sspecially with face planes and proportions. That would be a great start. It looks boring, but it's really the best way you can improve. Here is a good start for facial planes : https://www.anatomy4sculptors.com/?menu=9&sub=22#body
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Overall she has a very soft face making her look very young, if that's intended then you're on the right path. If you have a specific reference posting images of that will definitely help feedback too.
So far so good, keep it up and I'll keep checking your work out =D
There was really no reference for the face it was just a whole bunch of different picture i looked at
I forgot the other views here the are i havent done anything on it yet just been busy at work.
You should form the head as a whole an build on detail as you go.
Thats my advice, here's a paint over to show my suggestions for improvement.
I usually look at a lot of different reference myself, but I stick to a specific style for a character. In your case you look like you have a mixed bunch in there.
I did some paintovers myself, I don't mean to step on iadagraca's toes just thought the more the merrier.
Here's a Gif with some adjustments and painting:
Here's a still:
and here's an attempt at your 3/4ths view:
That's your first biggest mistake. You can't make study without reference. Go choose an actor or a specific person, get as much reference as you can, and work toward making your sculpt look as close as possible as the original reference.
You could start too by making some anatomy study. That would be the best to be honest. Sspecially with face planes and proportions. That would be a great start. It looks boring, but it's really the best way you can improve. Here is a good start for facial planes :
https://www.anatomy4sculptors.com/?menu=9&sub=22#body