Faris

mabdelfatah

a sneak peak of the cinematic character I have been working on, this is my come back to 3D after a year and half was wasted in the army, now I'm trying to push my limits a little bit and achieve some realism, I will publish the full character soon, stay tuned....
done using 3Ds Max + Zbrush + Mari + Photoshop + Vray
view Hi-Res :




Edit :
here is the final cinematic character, need you feedback and critiques so I can always improve
please view these hi-res images:

DWalker

The facial hair just isn't working for me. Part of it's the density & orientation, but I think it's mostly the uniform color & thickness. Take a look at this ridiculously large image:

Notice the different shades - everything from almost blonde to dark brown, with a bit of red tossed in. Granted there will be less variance with darker hair colors, but there should still be some.

Also note that not every hair is the same thickness; the outliers tend to be thinner. It might be simplest to show different thicknesses by using the alpha channel - thinner hairs are more transparent.

ysalex

I agree about the hair but dude, awesome skin shader and modeling.

mabdelfatah

Hey, Thanks guys this is constructive, I'm workin on it again and will publish the final result with the full character , Thanks again

mabdelfatah

here is the final cinematic character, need you feedback and critiques so I can always improve
please view these hi-res images:

Deathstick

Holy huge as hell screenshots batman! I need a bigger monitor..

Excellent job!

billymcguffin

The dark scratches on the metal look unnatural. They're too straight, and too short, and too uniform, and they're all the same thickness for the whole length of the scratch.

Texelion

The organic parts are awesome ( +1 for the beard, could be better ), the leather is really nice ( could use some dirt/variation on the boots imo ), but the metal parts... it's not at the same level. It's almost like you didn't take refs for that and just did random scratches everywhere.

lotet

wow, that looks amazing. good job!

mabdelfatah

Thanks so much everyone for the comments and crits your feedback is very important

manilamerc

this is awesome how long have you been doing this?

mabdelfatah

Thanks a lot
I have been learning and working in animation and VFX for 5 years, but I took a year and half off so it's 3 and half

GrungyStudios

dude cmon is this CG or real life lol looks so real, amazing work truely

some wireframe breakdowns and textures would be cool but if you dont have the time i understand

oxblood

this looks so real its unreal (if that makes sense ):shifty:

Shiniku

Fuck me, that's good. Great work

mabdelfatah

Thanks a lot guys

garriola83

Very cool indeed

mabdelfatah

thanks man