AIE Project :Memory Hard surface work

drazeni · Aug 2014

can i get any tips or advice on my work i Need some people to critique me for a Uni assignment.

http://www.squaredingo.com/#!portfolio/c1r6d

My portfolio if any one can spare the time i would very much appreciate it.

P.s Don't go easy on me be Brutally Honest

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drazeni · Nov 2014

can i get any tips or advice on my work i Need some people to critique me for a Uni assignment.

http://www.squaredingo.com/#!portfolio/c1r6d

My portfolio if any one can spare the time i would very much appreciate it.

P.s Don't go easy on me be Brutally Honest

Oniram · Nov 2014

it feels like none of your work is actually finished. its also a bit difficult to crit your work with such small images. what i can say is you need to tie your work together. right now it seems like youve just got the one environment going, and for the most part its just some random shots of a basically lit space with practically nothing in it.

make the environment. get some beauty renders. makes some breakdowns of your effective use of modular assets. show textures.

drazeni · Nov 2014

yeah its all still one big work in progress il Keep working away at it thanks for advice and your time

AIE Project :Memory Hard surface work

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