I am loving this concept. He looks so dark and badass. Only crit I have (in my limited experience) is it seems a bit busy. I would love to see the final textures and how you pose the beauty shots. This is going to be really badass.
This is looking cool, the biggest problem I have with it so far are the materials.
First off everything has sort of a filtery look to it, like maybe the cavity map or something is set too high.
Secondly, I'm not really getting a good sense of material read. I'm just seeing colors when I look at the various areas on the model. What sort of material are these creatures created from?
Thanks guys for constructive feedback, it is much appreciated!
I tried to improve materials, though i have to admit i have no idea what material is best for turboshark For now, it is combination of metal and synthetic leather. Driver is supposed to be covered in painted metal.
This is looking great, love how detailed it is, but it still reads well. I was doing some pose tests on mine and it's just so messy looking, but yours doesn't have that problem, great job!
mhm the lighting looks very even, maby a harder shadow could increase readability by taking the interest away from certain parts of the model, so you can focus better on the rest.
I don't like the fact I see the back of it, some really cool details and im seeing the back. Maybe the background is also not the right choice as its too noisey behind the character and vehicle, maybe without the asteroid ring.
Really interesting work just a few last things to sort out.
there is more detail on the back as vehicle is supposed to be somewhat aerodynamic, and therefore less interesting.
but i tried , and here is new version
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small progress:
finally decided which vehicle design I'm going to use.
Looking forward to see more !
Keep it up !
sword is just prop, most likely to be changed for different weapon
First off everything has sort of a filtery look to it, like maybe the cavity map or something is set too high.
Secondly, I'm not really getting a good sense of material read. I'm just seeing colors when I look at the various areas on the model. What sort of material are these creatures created from?
I tried to improve materials, though i have to admit i have no idea what material is best for turboshark
Started to work on environment, deadline is coming
This is my 'almost final' render, any comments, advices are highly appreciated!
Really interesting work just a few last things to sort out.
but i tried
Edit: wrong version uploaded...
Centurion JH274 is preparing for the duel
Centurion JH274 in the middle of the match
Centurion JH274 is made from this stuff
Edit: minor changes