rome_Tempel_Cryengine3

TK-Art

Hey guys,

I have made a little scene in the cryengine3 and i hope you can give me some feedback. thx for your reply and have a nice day.

Cheers,

Tom

Danex.DC

This is awesome! Good job man!

BJA

That looks great! needs some godrays and subtle dust particles coming from the windows

TK-Art

Hey BJA,

yeah you are right

It willl look muth more better than, thx alot.

Shrike

Looking good, my only concern is the pillars

They seem too thin for a classical doric column, (especially concerning the surroundings) - the fluted shaft, not the base or capital.

Also the stomach looks pretty strong, but would be alright if the diameter would be larger, and the grime looks a bit excessive

Edit: Now taking a second look, the flutes are wrong. Yours are like a
cog, simply extrusions, but classic columns always have a "U" or "V" concave area, not a "I_I" rectangular form


This may sound trivial but people will notice, theyre the pillars of
classicism architecture "badum tzz" - But for real, its important : P

Alphavader

good job man! i like the scene.
My little crit would be - is it like an abandoned temple ?
(i see some plants over the scene - but its not strong enough to indicate that - the flags are very clean for example - that made me guess, its not ment to be abandoned)
Cause roman people were very proud on there buildings/art and aesthetics - especially
the temples were sacred places and they were very polished.
They liked to show there pomp in many different ways - what
i want to say is - that your scene is very dirty - the pillars are looking very
used. Just a detail - what kind of story you want to tell

The people of Crytek catched that look very well - have a look to their art-dump

dblackwell_22

Looks amazing man. great job!