Dark Luke Skywalker critique

nGreenroad

Hello!
I'm concepting an evil Luke Skywalker to sculpt and optimize for UDK and would love a critique on the direction I should go.

http://imgur.com/NnAqoCq,ojvUpTF,YZXAZtb#2

http://imgur.com/NnAqoCq,ojvUpTF,YZXAZtb#1

http://imgur.com/NnAqoCq,ojvUpTF,YZXAZtb#0


What say you?

skyline5gtr

Im a fan of 3 i love the cloak

nGreenroad

Thanks! I think I will be rigging the hood to be both up or down, so now I am trying to get consensus on what should be underneath the hood.

Matt_Billeci

Im a fan of 3 or 4

skyline5gtr

4 then

PyrZern

Might have to lose his beards though. Depends if you can make it look like him.

nGreenroad

PyrZern, that's what I'm afraid of...I'll continue to post WIPs and you guys can tell me if it needs to go or not. Thanks a ton for the guidance guys!

Ssjtroll

I am really digging 3&4, but I like the hair from 1&2

Greg DAlessandro

Definitely 3. It reads Sith [dark side]. Having him wear a cloaked hood makes him seem more mysterious and sinister.

nGreenroad

Hello!
Here is an update on the sculpt for the concept. I started with a young Mark Hamill for reference to get defining features. After this I'm going to take some reference from old melty Mark Hamill. How can I make this better?

http://imgur.com/BBdbLLG

http://imgur.com/5EpC5d5

http://imgur.com/aGF9naV

http://imgur.com/QABKrhu

Rip it apart! I want to make it as good as possible and other perspectives make that happen.
Thanks!

butt_sahib

Hey man

Embedding the images for you. Its definitely alot better to post the images as BBcode /




He looks great. I can really make out the planes of the face. Id go in and flatten some surfaces and make them even more defined/simplified. I hope that makes sense.

Good luck

jose.fuentes

I love the one with the cloak

nGreenroad

Thanks Sahib! I'll embed them from now on.

Novez

Nice work!

nGreenroad

Here's some more progress!

nGreenroad

Here is some further refining for the head sculpt. Will post more on the body soon.
Does he look like an older Mark Hamill? (one that is semi fit)







How can I make this better?

LSheridan

It's looking like his face, for sure, but his hair is a very prominent feature when it comes to his overall look, so without that, it's hard to say for me. Something is also lost when going from the greyscale to the colored sculpt as well. Might just be the beard.

zoey

i can't see TAT

zoey

i can't see