Lumitron [WIP]

Kiser Designs

Hey PC,

Its been a while since I have posted anything on these forums. Its been a while since I have done any 3D modeling to be honest. My last job was a nightmare, to put it nicely, and completely destroyed the joy and passion I had for this kind of artwork. I had to take some time away from it but I was determined to not quit even though just opening up a 3D program gave me anxiety and stress.

Once I started getting back into the swing of things I decided to go back and finish a project I had started back before my horrible job. I had to shake off the cobwebs and relearn some things, am a bit rusty Ill admit but here is my progress so far.

Design is from Creaturebox The Monster Volume

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Renders




I am pleased with my progress so far. Except for the feet, I am not feeling the design at this point. I think some of my edges might be too tight on some parts of the model too.

Since the initial design was just a silhouette, I am left with some spaces that lack detail, such as where the arms meet the bulb and where the bulb meets the hips area. Any design advice or input or just general crits are welcome.

PolyTech

I would have to say your Edges are definitely over sharp especially if this is going to be a game mesh. I would also add more in thick and thin shapes. Bulk up the wires going to the arms. I wouldn't spend to much time on this guy though unless you are looking to build up a character portfolio. but over all you captured the character pretty well.

DWalker

The 'thighs' actually had two bones each in the concept, and the leg bones were all a bit thicker.

SaboR1996

I like the concept
cant wait for final result
also, looking at the concept I think the arms could be thicker.

Kiser Designs

Thanks for the crits guys. I will definitely work on loosening up the edges and thickening up certain areas plus fixing the thigh bones.