Deus Ex Lab Oven Game Asset

El_Serpiente

Hi all,

This is my first post here on Polycount but have been following guidance from it for a while now. I'm in the process of creating some game assets for my portfolio and would really like some feedback on my first complete game asset. I've chosen some art from Deus Ex to work from:

http://www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-19/art/dehr-montreal-lab-oven1.jpg
http://www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-19/art/dehr-montreal-lab-oven2.jpg

Here are my efforts displayed in 3DS Max using Xoliul Shader:





Any comments about the model itself or the general presentation, as I'm not sure I'm using Xoliul to it's fullest potential, would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

dzibarik

Bump texture on the red wall looks weird. Like it's something organic.

LANKUS MAXIMUS

Cool design, but i agree with the above crit. Looks like terracotta...

El_Serpiente

Thanks for the feedback guys. I was unsure about the bump on the tank too so went back and improved it.




Any other points are welcome :poly121:

Kimon

The links doesn't work for some reason. Just takes me to the main page.

As for the asset, it's looking much better now. But it feels like you still could do a lot of wear and tear, cool stuff in the spec and gloss etc