Sketches ~ Pls do a constructive critique

OlograMan

Hey guys! So this is my first thread here and i was looking for a good oportunity to bring something important and something which i need. So, here is two sketches drawned by me, and i need to know what you think about, because i'm transforming it in 3D model to put in my portfolio... So, thx to read and im waiting ur answer.:thumbup:

Avanthera

Right click the file in your dropbox folder on your pc, go down to 'copy public link' and dump that into the image thing in the message box. >> This thing.

OlograMan

Thx guy ^^ I will do this now ^^

OlograMan

Done! I had to put on imageshare... DropBox dont work this time.... So, i will be happy is anyone could tell me some critique about that graphics . :thumbup:

Avanthera

the girl concept is the better of the two, she has some areas of rest and detail that helps out a lot.

The guy is very symmetrical and has a lot of big and medium shapes, but no areas of detail, Paul richards has a good talk about this here:

http://autodestructdigital.blogspot.com/2011/10/find-design.html

The girl has those spots of overlapping plates, leather straps, and cloth wraps to give that visual noise. I think she might do even better without some of that wrapping on the legs to give a better ratio of noise vs rest.

Good luck on the rest!

OlograMan

Thanks guy! I will see the article and stud more to do a better concept ^^


Ps.: I will post my 3D models soon, so if u could critique him too i will be glad ^^