Sci Fi gun - Crit Here

oxblood

Hey again peeps, I got a concept from optinium somewhere around this forum and I thought id have a go at it, its not fully detailed yet as I'm in two minds about going any further, but here it is- let me know if u think its worth going on,


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Marshkin

Can we see the concept? It might be easier to give crit if we can see how close to the model it is so far.

oxblood

no prob

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oxblood

as a matter of fact.. I think think I may redo it

AlexCatMasterSupreme

I'll be honest, the concept kinda looks boxy and just odd overall and lacking functionality and that is being transferred into your model as well. There are also a lot of shapes that are not boxy that in the concept you have left out.