Hi guys its been a while since I've posted anything but this is first of many models not so much final but getting there I still have some kinks to fix especially the hand area but any other critiques would be great to help make this better
Looks pretty good but the presentation is letting it down.
From what I can see you need a better, lighter render. You need some more faces on the weapon. You need more material definition as all the surfaces read the same, the clothes need more variation and wear across the surface.
I agree with silvershrimp. Push the materials a bit more. Better lighting. Fill the image as there is a lot of wasted space.
Don't render on black background! Pick grey or something neutral.
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From what I can see you need a better, lighter render. You need some more faces on the weapon. You need more material definition as all the surfaces read the same, the clothes need more variation and wear across the surface.
Don't render on black background! Pick grey or something neutral.