portfolio crits please!
polycounter lvl 8
Hey everyone, I'm a recent uni graduate and I'm looking to get into the industry as a environment artist.
Here's my portfolio http://jimimcgowan.weebly.com/ any crits or suggestions for things to improve would be much appreciated, thanks!
Here's my portfolio http://jimimcgowan.weebly.com/ any crits or suggestions for things to improve would be much appreciated, thanks!
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Use consistent and correct capitalization. There's really no reason for all lower case titles.
On the Harley Davidson, your tires really need additional sides - they are very polygonal at the moment - and 19 sides is quite possibly the worst choice. I suppose you might have chosen that very odd number to match up spokes, but it looks far worse than 20 - or even 16 - sides. Even if you are limited by the maximum polycount, you can improve the tires by optimizing other, less important details.
Your CV claims experience working in the games industry, but it does not include an experience section. And, once again, capitalize titles - "personal interests" is all lowercase.
I wouldn't care much about your Contact page unless you have heartwarming story to tell. Otherwise slap your contact info onto your Banner and get rid of the page. You can make do without your picture.
Slap your name and URL onto every single image on your site. Each image could link to an even bigger image for better resolution.
Great use of the video reels there. Glad to not see still images in video form.
BTW, what is that super annoying auto scroll-up when I reach the end of the page ? Using Chrome here, btw.