Circus Wagon

Filcomet

Hi! This is my first thread and I'd like to show you my newest project, a Circus Wagon. I used a toy as reference.

Modeled in Maya and textures made in photoshop.

Comments are welcomed







Actual size of the textures : 2048

EmAr

Those iron bars definitely need some variation. Not sure if this would work but moving some of them a little upwards and downwards is worth trying if you haven't yet. Rotating some of them could work as well.

DWalker

The bars are rather widely placed, and one seems to be missing. Also, they are almost always black, only occasionally painted to match the color of the wagon. There is often a horizontal bar at the midpoint.


The details look to be sculpted in your normal map, but are flat in the renders.

Clark Coots

Looks pretty good. Right now there is obvious repetition on the vertical bars. You have enough room in your texture to make several unique bars. Then flip some of those vertically and rotate to break repetition more

Filcomet

Thanks for your comments I've made some adjustments to the bars, something more similar to the image @DWalker post

Filcomet

Kimon

Looking much better!

Filcomet

Thanks!