Famas assault rifle

BI0H0G

here is my 3rd gun to model this time is the famas asault rifle

here is the high poly



any critic or opinion is welcome,

new update

BI0H0G

here is an update on the normals and texture



this is not yet finish and i would like some feedback

DWalker

The presentation - with two overlapping rifles - is a bit muddled. It'd be easier to see if they were separated.

The cutouts on the muzzle break look too sharp and too closely spaced.

Kimon

The bake could have been much better with some softer edges.

BI0H0G

ok here is a close up of the model i re-bake and soften the edges on the high poly

Swarm22

May just be the way the gun is, but the normals look off on the body where the light hits it. Like you have gradient issues on your normal map.

BI0H0G

that's the defuse and specular map thats doing the gradient

Littlenorwegians

Think it turned out quite well. Working on one of these myself. Good job.
Very sharp contrast in that image. Almost becomes silhouetted.

Cglewis

Great start!
But a couple of your shapes are off, the top i guess rail is to high needs to come down to be almost even with that hook

also the bipod stands are the wrong shapes.

I would take a look your texture really try to push it
right now it reads as one mat, you need to go in and push it so each different mat type will read as such

I hope this helps
cant wait to see it done

BI0H0G

Thank i making a portfolio so i trying to make it look good. also i re-work the specular map to define the matirial

Cglewis

Look at that you missing so much texture definition
keep at it and really look at the modeling there are a few areas that need some work man

can you post wires?

BI0H0G

here is a test using udk and a basic shader



here is the wireframe

BI0H0G

here is the marmoset render