Nice start, I think porportion wise, her hips could be a little wider compared to her lowertorso, more of the hourglass shape like in the concept. Her hands look kind of masculin too, but overall you've chosen a nice piece to do and I think she could turn out pretty bad ass. Keep it goin.
I think the upper body is a bit longer and more narrow in the concept, it could be the lack of a head is throwing off my perception, so it might just be something to keep in mind. Also the forearms in the concpet are more narrow (they almost have a "dip" to them) than what you currently have, I think.
MrHobo : I think you're right about the upper body. Making it longer would help getting closer to that slender body type the concpet has. As for the forearms, I think making the wrists more narrow would help.
I took a break from the body to make her weapon, here's the highpoly sculpt :
cool character, yeah latest shots arent showing, based on the shots I can see I think her torso needs to be longer and slimmer, her chest seems really petite in the concept whereas your model is more believeable anatomy.
can't see the latest shots, but i can see that you're already doing the same thing with her abdomen as you've done with your past models (which i remember was commented on then, too).
you need to really take a solid look at how the muscles of the abdomen overlap each other. how they interact with the ribs and hips.
Ooh! nice I love the arms and those shoes-! Her eyes could be a little less deep? I think? It looks really sunken at the moment which makes her look a little older- but it could just be me- loving it so far!
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Stockwell: I agree about the hips, I made them wider.
I began to block out her gear. I chose to begin with her shoes as I like them a lot.
I think the upper body is a bit longer and more narrow in the concept, it could be the lack of a head is throwing off my perception, so it might just be something to keep in mind. Also the forearms in the concpet are more narrow (they almost have a "dip" to them) than what you currently have, I think.
I took a break from the body to make her weapon, here's the highpoly sculpt :
Here's a few progress shots.
you need to really take a solid look at how the muscles of the abdomen overlap each other. how they interact with the ribs and hips.
Ged : thanks, I'll make these proportion changes when I'm done with the sculpt.
almighty_gir : I'll take a look at your post about the abdomen on my previous thread, thanks
ClusterOne & lotet : Thanks for the kind words
I had to make some modifications from the concept as the puffy short didn't look so good in 3D =/
TunaSandwich : You could be right, I'll make a version with the eyes not as deep to see if it looks better, thanks.
I made the lowpoly of her weapon. Currently 5k triangles.