Are these low poly? They both feel very unfinished. The first girl is probably worse because she feels like you were going for more realistic and the hair is just completely half-assed. Daphne isn't as bad cuz she is a cartoon character but still she could use some love. Posing these and rendering them nicely will also make a big difference.
I can tell you like your folds in the clothing of the characters, but I wouldn't say they all make complete sense. Some make the clothing feel unrealistic, such as the second model in purple (from scooby-doo?), under her breasts looks way to tight, as if shes not wearing clothes at all. Then some of the fold in other models like the Mario dressed girl, her arm folds feel unnatural. The folds are a nice touch and eye catching, but I would study clothes just a bit more to get a more accurate outcome.
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Finished with the soldier.