Mech Drone - wip

IG-515

Hello, been working on this mech for a couple of weeks and wanted some feedback. Its not meant to be a game model, but more just to show modeling and design skills. Any feedback is appreciated. I use 3dsmax for the modeling.

coresplendor

The design looks awesome. However, the image is way too small and there's also the compression problem.... To really show the details, you gotta upload a much bigger image (and with better compression). Wireframe shots would be nice too. Anyway, i liked the design.

IG-515

sorry about that. here are some larger images.

D4V1DC

If you don't plan to add damage to it, perhaps a bit of color, perhaps desert camo?

Looks nice otherwise for being made in 3dsmax.

SkyGround

Looks great!

But I barrely could see - how it moves.
Also - some parts intersections looks "boring and cheat" - its just bring together like on glue - without holes or bolts ot some other thing that keeps it together.

And - looks like main black parts - are plastic. Because for metall it look too monolith and heavy, because there are no stiffeners

IG-515

D4V1DC wrote: »

If you don't plan to add damage to it, perhaps a bit of color, perhaps desert camo?

Looks nice otherwise for being made in 3dsmax.

Thank you for the critique D4V1DC. I tried some camo but it was taking away from the spec and topology. Looked too busy. I will experiment with it some more.

And I will have to shoot myself for learning, teaching, and earning money for years on an inferior program such as 3dsmax. I obviously made a mistake.

IG-515

SkyGround wrote: »

Looks great!

But I barrely could see - how it moves.
Also - some parts intersections looks "boring and cheat" - its just bring together like on glue - without holes or bolts ot some other thing that keeps it together.

And - looks like main black parts - are plastic. Because for metall it look too monolith and heavy, because there are no stiffeners

thank you skyground. I will tighten it up with some extra fasteners and bolts. And i will do away with any plastic looking shaders

Cactus on Fire

Amazing. Gotta love industrial-futuristic concepts. I see you've been inspired by names like Aaron Beck and Vitaly Bulgarov. The only suggestion I can make is to add finer and even smaller details. And maybe render the model in a more atmospheric environment with some postprocessing.

Looks great overall, keep it up !

IG-515

Cactus on Fire wrote: »

Amazing. Gotta love industrial-futuristic concepts. I see you've been inspired by names like Aaron Beck and Vitaly Bulgarov. The only suggestion I can make is to add finer and even smaller details. And maybe render the model in a more atmospheric environment with some postprocessing.

Looks great overall, keep it up !

Thanks dude! I'm adding more details as I type. Aaron and Vitaly are beasts and very inspiring. I appreciate the feedback.

simmou23

I'am a big fan of hard surface .
There is a lot of great details here , but not as much in texture .
great job

Tomiajayi

How did you do the environment?  Looks like an hdr background that became a real floor...

Cactus on Fire

This kicks ass man. Great job !

Amsterdam Hilton Hotel

This looks really nice. I think the cannon stands out as a little square/blocky in a way the rest of the mech isn't, especially in its silhouette