Mobile Game puppy Looking for crit.

vchoud

Hi all. This is my first mobile game model and I was hoping to get some feedback. I am at 2200 triangles at the moment. Client is asking for a nintendog like golden retriever puppy. I am planning on using 512 maps. Looking for some feedback. Thanks all.

Joltya

Aww it looks adorable!

I think the seam down the middle of the model looks very odd, but you're probably already aware of that. The nose could use more definition, and the front of the neck needs to be pulled back some. The tail should be more straight for the rigger to properly rig it. You also have an excess of geo on the front of the chest.

vchoud

Thanks Jolt. Yes, sorry about the seam I haven't merged the mesh together yet. I will address all the things you have brought up. Thanks again.

.Wiki

For a puppy the nose looks a bit long, I would make the whole mouth area a bit shorter. This would result in a much cuter look

vchoud

awesome. Thank, I'll make those adjustments.

slosh

Just make sure you get a lot of reference and get the proportions correct. the legs look a little off right now.

vchoud

will do. I have been looking at tons of reference and will continue to do so. Thank you.