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Transformer WIP

Looking for some input on the over all look of my Transformer Any and all advice is welcome. i Don't mind people being harsh but please don't be an A**. Thank you.

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  • silvershrimp
    Modelling is being obscured by the saturation of the hues. The harsh Daylight system is making it worse. Compression on your images is adding to this. You've posted too many similar images, try making some presentation sheets, like Transformed / not transformed. Wireframes, unshaded. etc.
    Try some Mental Ray architectural presets or look up how to render different car paints and vehicle metals. The edges all seem boxy and need chamfering and rounding. Waist seems really high and it looks like you've based it on a toy transformer from the proportions?
    Seems ok but needs a lot of work.
  • D4V1DC
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    D4V1DC polycounter lvl 18
    He really transforms? cool.

    Also i agree with the saturation comments it is too much & can't make out whats going on.

    If you can desaturate the current colors and post new images (not just desaturated current images) we could help more.

    Otherwise nice work so far.
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