Drone Ship Critique

Dwclesi

Hey Everyone,

I am a current student and have been working on this ship for a while now. Any feedback you can give would be awesome!

Thanks!

Noren

Looking good overall, but really hard to read. (A bit cluttered and the high contrast paintjob doesn't help. It kind of makes sense from a camouflage/ confusing the eye aspect but the lights work against that.

Xaragoth

I'd have to agree with Noren that it's a bit hard to read overall. Though I do not mind the paintjob as much. It's more the shape that seems a bit chaotic.

Looks a bit bottom heavy overall, since a lot of the ships mass centers there and it's hard to tell why exactly that is. Especially on a drone that shouldn't need a pilot, you'd expect it to favor a lot less mass.

I do like it aside from that though. Seems a bit like a StarCraft 2 Banshee.

Vertrucio

It also doesn't read like a drop ship, instead, it seems like some kind of heavy fighter. How does it carry its cargo? What kind of cargo does it carry? Infantry? Tanks?

You also lack any indicators as to how big this is. Even a large drone will need access panels, handhold and footsteps.

If it picks up and carries some kind of payload on the outside, you'll want to make room for that in the design.