Mars Ashton Portfolio Feedback

nujakujata

Hey folks, long time lurker here. I'm always looking for a few tips, suggestions, or critiques on my work, so I wanted to post a few examples and direct you to my blog and whatnot. I vary. I go from low poly characters and assets to full-blown Flash-based games and vector graphics. I can't get enough. What do you think? More can be found via links in my sig. Thanks in advance!

Mrfido

This looks really good Keep up the good work. Your art style is really interesting.

nujakujata

Thanks!

D4V1DC

First 3 images I love, nice work.
I really like this guy in your portfolio.

Vertrucio

You need to work more on variations between light and dark. Everything you just posted seems to be the same overall level of brightness. If I was to desaturate all your images and blur them, everything would blend into the background.

Which also contributes to the overall lack of detail.

The single 3D model you posted has a bit sloppy texture work in terms of lining up with the poly detail.

nujakujata

@D4V1DC
Thanks. I'm a fan of Grimnir too.

@Vertrucio
Thank you for the honest feedback. I definitely see what you mean regarding contrast, so I'll keep that in mind in the future. Could you elaborate on the lack of detail part, though? You mentioned it was 'overall' but didn't specify.