Lukiszlak's Briefcase :)

lukiszlak

Hi everyone. I'm new here and this is my second post.
I've registered to this forum to recieve a lot of feedback especially about methods and anatomy for sculting. I know that you guys are great people who will help me grow better and better




Soo my latest work
http://p3d.in/jdrC9
I like the abs but i cant get this real anatomy curvature of the muscles...
And i cant do face. That is my weakness. Ive tried sooo many times.
Hope you can help guys

silvershrimp

I think you should finish this a bit more, it's so unfinished it's hard to say. I suggest you embed it in the forum or at least post some screengrabs. It's got potential.
What anatomy reference are you using?

lukiszlak

i always search for anatomy references in google graphics and find what i need(i hate to search it on pinterest) And about that character the one thing that i can finish there is head and then i dont know what to do next.

silvershrimp

Its wildly out of proportion and has no hands, fix those and get some really good anatomical reference. This is ok [ame="http://www.amazon.com/Anatomy-Artist-Sarah-Simblet/dp/078948045X"]Anatomy for the Artist: Sarah Simblet, John Davis: 0635517080452: Amazon.com: Books[/ame] you can get better sources, google loomis, goldfinger, hogarth etc.

lukiszlak

Thanks for it but i wanted it to be "shorten" and the hands need to be like penguin hands
I will check this book when i have money. I will try with loomis etc Do you have any good tips on face?

Kimon

The human body is a very complex combination of shapes. You would probably do yourself a favor by going back and really study those fundamentals and basics before jumping on something like this.

silvershrimp

Took me a long time to get decent, look at skulls, facial muscles and try building up shapes with clay tubes. While you are learning avoid exaggerated and cartoon characters, there's too much temptation to lie to yourself and say "I wanted it to look like that" or settle on something you've made rather than working from reference and going for accuracy. Try the library for anatomy books.

lukiszlak

Ok so i'll try to do some basic's.
At first i've tried to do face from reference images


http://p3d.in/ANq2h
refs: front side
Its still a w.i.p. but if there is a some simple mistakes then help me

Brian "Panda" Choi

Do you mind just posting IMGs of your work as well, just in case p3D chugs on other people's computers?

lukiszlak

JadeEyePanda wrote: »

Do you mind just posting IMGs of your work as well, just in case p3D chugs on other people's computers?

I didnt think of that But done

Vailias

Your mesh density is too high too quick.
Take it down a few subdivisions and mass in the major forms first. Keep it blocky till all the major bits are in place, then subdivide. Block in at that level, rinse repeat. It may help to make a blurred or posterized copy of your reference so you don't get distracted by details until you need them.

Brian "Panda" Choi

This is what we mean by "major bits."

The Planes of the Face.



Get that head sculpted first before you do any detailing or personalization.

lukiszlak

Ok i'm back (i would love to say it's not a pop up and then gone)
I've done a few tries at the chest anatomy and here's the results
https://sketchfab.com/models/f4372d1c6aed42abbc01157f2954195a
https://sketchfab.com/models/44d2adc745ac48939bd825f030f44c2b
https://sketchfab.com/models/32610a3c4b174675b8c8f22ae9d3211e

also tried do the face but it's ekhem ugly.
https://sketchfab.com/models/b143f57f361c4140819faba1c7ebc994
I cant really understand the shape of the face even with the planes of it but It's too complicated for me right now. Do you think maybe trying do do separate pieces like eyes mouth nose will help me with it?
Also im waiting for a lot of critiques