You should add the high res link, so we don't have to click on every single img. If your uploading site don't let you, use imgur like most of the people around here.
It's looking really nice from what I can see so far (without opening up the bigger images) good lightning, great mood, pretty colors.
just took a quick glimpse at some images. the only thing i noticed, is that with no change of water movement/displacement around the wooden supports... you can clearly see the water is going right through the supports, so i'd suggest working on that a tad. you could setup a flowmap to help with that, but honestly, its not a big deal, just would make it slightly more believable. also, your supports don't look like they are wet near the water, at least not that I can see from the screen shot. other than that, they look pretty good.
It feels really empty, I'm not getting the sense of a back story at all. Maybe add some more assets that tell the story of why this land is forgotten and who lived there?
This is very nice sir. You really nailed the lighting for both nighttime and sunset. I could see this as part of an open world type game as it looks like it would be fun to explore.
The water is maybe a little bit bothersome. I'm not quite sure but maybe its the scale of the ripples and surface deformation, or how it interacts with the land. I can see you did a lot to fix the edge issues and it helps, with the pond scum and lilies and rock overhangs.
Britishness aside, and the water aside which really could use some work, it's all very solid. Great lighting in particular. Things like the grass distribution and texture variety feel a bit uniform. But damn does that lighting work!
To fix up some of the water issues, i'd suggest a height fog at the bottom of the water, make it a slight brown and lower the opacity to make it barely visible. this should break it up and fix some of the problems. I personally feel like its a bit too clear with the depth and the fact that its running water. either way, i'd say give it a try and see if it gets rid of the "weirdness"
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It's looking really nice from what I can see so far (without opening up the bigger images) good lightning, great mood, pretty colors.
luge I agree, have to do something with it.
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The water is maybe a little bit bothersome. I'm not quite sure but maybe its the scale of the ripples and surface deformation, or how it interacts with the land. I can see you did a lot to fix the edge issues and it helps, with the pond scum and lilies and rock overhangs.
Good job!
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Britishness aside, and the water aside which really could use some work, it's all very solid. Great lighting in particular. Things like the grass distribution and texture variety feel a bit uniform. But damn does that lighting work!
What dat language u using..? Me no understanding... Me go back to eating XXL bucket of chicky wings ...
Americaness aside, this looks incredible man!