First attempt at a female model. Crit Please.

oldrasputin

Here is my first attempt at a female model.



ANY hard anatomy tips would be greatly appreciated.

Z-brush 4 not the craziest cpu or ram mac….
Sculpted from the super average man tool in z-brush.
Spent a lot of time looking for good FREE reference.

what I was going for was a tall, lanky yet still pear shaped, youngish woman ~16-19, who will be further detailed. I want her nose to be biggish, and a little bent or hooked, I also want her to have slightly pointy ears and large "weird" almond eyes.

jeeze I had a hard time sculpting the boobs and getting them to be smallish, and not totally stupid looking.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/62373856@N03/13408843875/ <---Video turntable

ANY hard anatomy tips would be greatly appreciated. Also if you think anything is good about it feel free to share that too, (I don't wish to be totally crushed…lol)!

Also any pointers on uploading video would be great, though I may find the answer when I fully read the polycount wiki.

Thanks for any and all help,

Ole' Raspy

dvisionvoid

I'm not an anatomy expert but i think that the shoulders look weird in the perspective view. I really like the geometric tattoos

oldrasputin

dvisionvoid, Yup the right shoulder sure does look lumpy, and devoid of structure in that last image. Thanks the geo-tats were just for fun!

Did you have trouble with the video link?