If you're looking to copy the material, your rocks are a bit too rounded and don't fit together like the reference. Could maybe do with some slightly brighter patches too. Also obviously clean up the messy edges. Good start with good definition of the forms, and those cracks are nice too.
I think this is a good start, you just need to put more time into it.
One thing I would suggest is think about how each block is placed. In the reference each block is placed with thought by a skilled hand to make sure the wall is sturdy and supports its own weight.
I think you can also get a variation of values in between the rocks. To help ground them. Right now they are kind floating.
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One thing I would suggest is think about how each block is placed. In the reference each block is placed with thought by a skilled hand to make sure the wall is sturdy and supports its own weight.
I think you can also get a variation of values in between the rocks. To help ground them. Right now they are kind floating.
Also I agree with everything AGarton is saying.
Keep up the good work!