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Hawt Koffee polycounter lvl 13
https://vimeo.com/89729178

I just finished my 6th quarter demoreel and i was hoping to get some feedback on it, I'm pretty sure this is my first Reel posted to polycount.
Always pretty reluctant to post my reel here but I would certainly like the feedback.

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  • Cglewis
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    Cglewis polycounter lvl 12
    pretty good compostion of pieces you got there, great job man!

    the biggest thing that jumps out to me after watching this...what is your focus? you have a handfull of charectors in there one enviroment, some props and a couple animations.

    I feel your kitchen piece is your weakest piece the reason for that is it is lacking texture the camera pans are a bit off and i feel you need to loose the bg image that you can see through the door, it is distracting and takes your eye away from you want the focus to be.

    I love the charector pieces, and i would love to see a more fleshed out capisol bot, i feel you could push that and make it really cool! love the intial design though :)

    your dota pieces were pretty neat but i feel that showing valves charector detreacts from your reel. maybe make a charector to wear the armor that is all your creation.

    It felt a bit long....but i guesse that is bc you crammedeverything in there when you know what yoru focus is then i feel you reel it in to a much better time.

    I really hope this helps :)
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