1st Game Character / Marmoset

GankerBanker

Hello people of the day. This is my first character made specifically for games. I would love to get some CC's and tighten the project up. Its a concept by Darren Bartley aka fightPUNCH. Posted a WIP a bit ago and here is the finished version.
you can check out the turtable HERE.

silvershrimp

Looks cool, like the face, reads well. Overall it's pretty good, I don't like the flat bare front of the chest. The armour on the shins has a weird split making it look like he has 2 knees. There's normal map seams running up the arms? The gun blends into the suit as the whole thing is very grey. The back of the suit has lost its pattern into a weird moire. Overall I like it.

GankerBanker

Thanks for the tips. I am not sure what you mean by a weird split on the kneepads could you elaborate so I can fix?

silvershrimp

The shin has 2 armour pads with an indent halfway down, doesn't read very well, looks like odd lumpy armour. Is it a very long knee pad and a very short shin pad?

GankerBanker

Oh! Ok I will fix the issue