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Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle-FINISHED

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  • Frawmus
    Pretty good stuff man!
    When you start your next project I'd recommend really studying the subject's anatomy a bit more beforehand. Theres a couple things that are off. its just small things, but they'll make a huge difference. Right now it looks okay, but slightly strange. This is because the thighs and quads are feeling very tiny compared to the top of the body.
    The neck seems to be sticking out, when most turtles have it more sunken in (And if you look at TMNT reference they are more sunken in as well)
    Then..the feet. The TMNT have ankle you know? It makes them seem more like an quadruped? Adding an ankle will make it more flat footed feeling like TMNT is.

    tl;dr
    Good work, but could really use some more balance so it doesn't feel top heavy, and add ankles.
  • PsychoWolf53
    Frawmus wrote: »
    Pretty good stuff man!
    When you start your next project I'd recommend really studying the subject's anatomy a bit more beforehand. Theres a couple things that are off. its just small things, but they'll make a huge difference. Right now it looks okay, but slightly strange. This is because the thighs and quads are feeling very tiny compared to the top of the body.
    The neck seems to be sticking out, when most turtles have it more sunken in (And if you look at TMNT reference they are more sunken in as well)
    Then..the feet. The TMNT have ankle you know? It makes them seem more like an quadruped? Adding an ankle will make it more flat footed feeling like TMNT is.

    tl;dr
    Good work, but could really use some more balance so it doesn't feel top heavy, and add ankles.
    There is an ankle :) just that this poistion of the camera doesnt show it, But u got some right points, Thx :3
  • Brian "Panda" Choi
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    Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range
    What's the final polyocunt?

    Do you have texture maps?

    Is it safe to just call this a sculpt?
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 20
    You need to offer more information than a simple image. Also, include wire frame shots and texture break downs.

    Unless your goal was to just post the image and gauge the reactions. My reaction: There is not enough here for a proper critique, so you're wasting your time by posting this :)
  • PsychoWolf53
    What's the final polyocunt?

    Do you have texture maps?

    Is it safe to just call this a sculpt?

    29,000 only body, 77,000 the body with all the rest,The model itself is made of high poly, since the start :)

    I'll add texture maps after Zbrush

    It's not a sculpt cause it was made in 3ds max, It can be a sculpt when i'll take it to zbrush :)
  • PsychoWolf53
    adam wrote: »
    You need to offer more information than a simple image. Also, include wire frame shots and texture break downs.

    Unless your goal was to just post the image and gauge the reactions. My reaction: There is not enough here for a proper critique, so you're wasting your time by posting this :)

    I did offer all information in the previous post, with the steps of how i maked it, but i think the images got remove there, here they are :
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  • CandyStripes05
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    CandyStripes05 polycounter lvl 9
    I did offer all information in the previous post, with the steps of how i maked it, but i think the images got remove there, here they are :


    always preview your post, your first post has zero info in it which you can fix with the edit button in the bottom right of every post
  • PsychoWolf53
    always preview your post, your first post has zero info in it which you can fix with the edit button in the bottom right of every post

    Thanks :) And can u tell me how to quote 2 ppl and more ?
  • CandyStripes05
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    CandyStripes05 polycounter lvl 9
    pretty sure you need to copy and paste in the second quote if you want to quote two or more in one post
  • PsychoWolf53
    pretty sure you need to copy and paste in the second quote if you want to quote two or more in one post
    Thanks :) Any advice about the turtle?
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