[WIP] Spas 12 Shotgun

Particle

Hello all
I'm Sam, 15. I'm a young French 3D Artist. I'm currently working on a Spas 12. I achieved the High Poly work, and the Low Poly will be posted soon. All the modeling was done in Maya.
This is my second attempt about weapon modeling. I mostly created environments for the moment. I used my imagination for the starp and for the red dot aim.

Some screens (rendered in Marmoset Toolbag 2) :









Hope you enjoy Feedback is very appreciated.
Sam.

Particle

Nobody ?

Here's the Lowpoly work with the UV Map. Feedback is really appreciated as usual
I removed the starp and the red dot because they are separate pieces.

Particle

UP !

New UV Map (more organized), baked maps from Xnormal and some renders from Marmoset Toolbag !
Next step : Texturing.








Hope some answers, I really need critic to improve my work
Sam

billymcguffin

Do you have a reference? It looks to me like you're missing some details like screws. Also the stock/grip areas are looking boxy.

Particle

I used this reference as a base :


But I modified the concept a little bit. Mainly around the picatinny rail and the pump.
I'll add details to the barel, bolts etc... In nDo 2

When you say too hard, which edges are too hard ?

Thanks for feedback,
Respect,
Sam

DWalker

The Picatinny rails don't look quite right - too shallow and wide.

Particle

I used screens from CoD to design the Picatinny rail. It's very close to the references :

tynew

As a general rule of thumb, you should never using game art as references. Your doing a real life weapon, you may as well do it right and look at the profile reference like Dwalker posted above and actually gather reference images on the Spas 12. All Picatinny rails have the same profile. Yours is not quite right.

Particle

I improved the rail.

theSixtyEight

Particle wrote: »

I improved the rail.

try to model that rail again, it still doesnt match up at all

dazzerfong

CoD's rails are completely disproportionate: use real-life references or even better, technical drawings. DWalker's pic is one such example.

Last thing, the reflex sight: I'm going to assume it's the Sure Shot sight.



It's quite a bit bigger than you might think.

Particle

dazzerfong wrote: »

CoD's rails are completely disproportionate: use real-life references or even better, technical drawings. DWalker's pic is one such example.

Last thing, the reflex sight: I'm going to assume it's the Sure Shot sight.



It's quite a bit bigger than you might think.

Thanks for tip about CoD and for the reference. I'll improve it.