[Environment] Sting Like a Bee

becoolmin

Hi guys,

Here's my latest Environment work.

Used Maya / Mari / Marmoset Toolbag.

All critics are welcome

Also I'm actively looking for a job, PM me or email at becoolmin@gmail.com

Cheers,



Breakdown Vid - http://goo.gl/lXFgvb

WebSite - http://www.becoolmin.com

SaboR1996

This stuff belongs in pimping and previews :P not in general discussion
Looks good though!

becoolmin

SaboR1996 // Thanks!!

luge

This looks great, I don't really have any comments and can not see anything wrong with it honestly.

imperator_dk

Looks great, things that jump at me are floor boards look a bit smallish, some kind of refractive material on the water tank might be cool, gloves seem a tad too glossy.

An3D

Yes like it. great job.

HitmonInfinity

Pretty good stuff! I'd get rid of the yolo though. Doesn't really fit the era you're going for.

Clark Coots

i like everything about it except the YOLO.

enoki

Great work on the detailing!

Stockwell

I think everyone is pretty much in agreement with the yolo. Hence the name of the piece, I'd like to see"Sting Like a Bee" up there instead. Otherwise, it looks great. Super nice materials, lighting is spectacular. Great job!

oxblood

This is great, very inspiring.

AbKI

This looks really good! I could not do anything half as good as this so take my critique with a pinch of salt.

It may just be me but the gloves don't read quite right to me glossiness-wise, and the leather on the folded chair against the wall looks really great but then the chair with the gloves on looks really glossy compared to it if that makes sense.

It really is fantastic though, congrats!

Jet_Pilot

yeah the gloves look too glossy, same goes for the tape around the bag. They usually use a cloth taps, so the spec and gloss should be down on that part.

becoolmin

luge, An3D, enoki, oxblood // Thanks for kind words!!

imperator_dk // Thx for the comments. I totally agree with you about water bottle. I kinda had hard time to get refractioness on it with marmoset. I'll try it again soon.

HitmonInfinity, coots7, Stockwell // Um, actually I was aiming for modern era, who is young boxer, want to be next Pac-man, repects Ali. However since you guys brought this up, I will definetly consider about YOLO

AbKI // Thx and agreed. I should fix the glossiness of the shaders.

Jet_Pilot // Thx. Agreed about gloves, the tape around the bag, maybe I should tone it down a bit. However, many of references pictures that I found used duct tapes on the bag. Maybe I should look it up more


Cheers :poly009: