Rifle: CZ 805 - Modeling and Texturing

leonano

Hi Guyss!!!
I am looking for feedback of my last job
It is a custom FPS rifle.
Modeling in Maya, texturing in Substance and "render" in Marmoset.

In my website found all pictures:
MY WEBSITE





I'm sorry but i love Marmoset's DOF lol
p.s: Sorry for my bad English!!!

dazzerfong

The Picatinny rails look a bit funny: the bottom of the rail is flat.



And, if we refer to the above picture, stock looks a bit plain. If we had an overall picture of the weapon (lower FOV, minimal angle), we can judge a bit better.

leonano

You're right!!!

I customized the rifle by following these reference.



I'm sorry but I have so many pictures of the gun in my site

http://leonano.com/site/cz-805-modeling-texturing/

share all photos on the forum?

theSixtyEight

oh please remove that DOF, like it would tell "I wanted to hide this part of rifle because it looks bad, so I used DOF"

leonano

I'm sorry but I have so many pictures of the gun in my site

http://leonano.com/site/cz-805-modeling-texturing/

share all photos on the forum?

I'm sorry but i love DOF anyway i not tell "i wanted to hide this part of rifle..." because i take more pictures of rifle. They are all in my website...

Tim270

I would strongly revisit the textures, pretty much all the materials read the same at the moment and more than that lack interest.

I would really look hard at for example getting a strong distinction between the metal parts and the rubber parts.

saksoy

I agree with Tim. i think you should bump up the spec abit more and add some scratches and light dirt marks just to show its been used and makes it more interesting to look at. right now it looks brand new fresh out the box. Work on the texture to show whats metal and whats rubber because its hard to tell. I'm looking at your last reference image to compare it to yours by the way. Other than that everything else looks great. you have a great model just work more into the texture that's all

Pedro Amorim

I believe that other than the textures, the whole model as accuracy issues.

Infact does the model even have normal maps?

In this shot, http://leonano.com/site/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/screenshot006.jpg

the edges all look like they don't. I would sugest going back and work a bit more on its accuracy. Soz

leonano

Thank you guys.
When I have time. I'll fix the Picatinny rails, I'll increase the polygons in optics and I will increase the materials's difference betwen abs and metal.

Do you know any trick to have a strong difference of materials?
i think fix glossiness map.

DWalker

The scope's eyepiece feels very polygonal at the moment, and the texture is pixilated there. Keep in mind that it will be quite large in the first person view, especially when aiming, so you really should spend a few extra polys (from the current 20 to at least 24 and probably 32 sides) and some extra texture space. The problems are quite visible in your penultimate image, the HDR room.

I don't know why you'd have a long-range scope and a short range light on the same weapon; they'd seem to be mutually exclusive.